Hello and thank you for coming to read my Six Sentence Sunday post!
Today, I’m sharing another six from MADE FOR HER, a military sci-fi erotic romance set to release this Tuesday, January 15, from Decadent Publishing.
Colonel Mikayla Jones is confronting General Madison after she left her squadron. Remember, Daniel is her late husband.
Her commanding officer rose from his desk, his hands raised in the air. “Now calm down, Colonel Jones, and remember who you are talking to.”
She slammed the door. “I can’t believe you let them clone Daniel and then send him to me to train. I had no problem training them when I didn’t know who they were made from, but this is just…wrong. Daniel never gave permission.”
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Oh that’s just rude of them. Great six. I’m outraged on her behalf!
The ethical problems make the potential romantic angst even better. Great six!
Sarah W recently posted..Six Sentence Sunday: Full Metal Librarian LVII (Revoked)
Ooo, very intriguing six! I love the electricity between them. I think these are two people who love to spar…sets the tone for some fun scenes, I’m sure. Congrats on your upcoming release. Going to be an exciting week for you!
To say ‘not fair’ would be an understatement. Good twist, Jessica.
charmaine gordon recently posted..SIX SENTENCE SUNDAY
Holy crap. She has every right to be angry!! This sounds awesome.
Dee Carney recently posted..Six Sentence Sunday
Oh, wow. That sounds like an ethical mess.
Eleri Stone recently posted..Six Sentence Sunday
Oh, very intriguing! I can feel her anger! Well done, Jessica!
Cerian Hebert recently posted..SIX SENTENCE SUNDAY-Jan. 13, 2013
Powerful 6, wow, Jessica. The implications of what has been done really grabs at your heart. Fantabulous 6.
S. J. Maylee recently posted..Six Sentence Sunday #49 The Right Thing
Whoa, what an awful situation. Well done!! I want to know more.
Gem Sivad recently posted..Six Sentence Sunday
Spooky one. A clone of your late husband. The nerve!
Oh wow. Great premise–you’ve hooked me. Great excerpt, Jessica!
Karla Doyle recently posted..Six Sentence Sunday-01/13/2013
Wow, that’s a little intense – having to train the clone of her dead husband. I like it!
Lisa Fox recently posted..Recent Posts January 12, 2013
I knew it! Great 6! Yeah, this sounds like it’s packing a wallop of a premise–lots of tension, ethical issues, and more!
Angela Quarles recently posted..Six Sentence Sunday – 1/13/13
Oh, WOW. No wonder she walked out! Awesome twist!
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Holy crap! Jessica!!!! Okay. I have to get this book to read. Dang, woman!!!!
Silver James recently posted..Six Sentence Sunday – Talk!
That’s such a twist and so sad. I can’t wait to read more, see how this plays out. I feel so sorry for her on various levels – great six!
Veronica Scott recently posted..Six Sentence Sunday – Science Fiction Continues
ohhh, what a situation. Poor her, to find out that way. Terrific six!
Joanne Stewart recently posted..Six Sentence Sunday–1/13/13
Wow! What a plot. Adding this to the top of my reading list.
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Yes, the premise here is pretty mind-blowing! Great six, Jessica!
Kate Meader recently posted..Six Sentence Sunday #39: All Fired Up
How could they do that to her? Oh wow, I’d be spitting nails too… How is she going to handle this? Such an intriguing six!
dianne hartsock recently posted..Goddess Fish Tour Winner!
Wow, that is an amazing problem to have! Great premise, there are so many exciting places this could go!
Jessica Knauss recently posted..SSS: A New Fiancé
You do a great job with her character; her barely restrained emotion speaks volumes.
Is she absolutely sure he didn’t? I love the emotion in these sentences and the way you show it through her dialogue and her physical actions.
This is wonderful. What a difficult and angst scene you have put her into. But is he a real clone or somehow Daniel has escaped death?
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I didn’t see that twist coming. She has every right to be pissed. What a shock. Great six, Jessica!
Oh, this is an awesome idea! It gives her someone new to fall in love with. Great six, Jessica, and congrats on your upcoming release!
Holy crap! What a great premis. Fantastic six too!
Wow, that’s one dilemma to have to face. It’s a great premise for a book.
Carrie-Anne recently posted..Six Sentence Sunday—Owned by the Butler
Well, now that’s certainly a problem. Great six!
Jen Duffey recently posted..Six Sentence Sunday
Love this premise! She may be mad… Daniel may or may not have agreed… but ultimately there is a clone now and she’ll have to face him again. Love it.
Lorraine Paton recently posted..Awakening A Witch #12 – Six Sentence Sunday
I feel so sorry for her. But I so wonder–did Daniel perhaps give permission and not tell her? Can’t wait to see how this all plays out. Awesome six!
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Great six Jessica! Packed with tension. Oh..the possibilities… delicious!
Teresa Cypher recently posted..Six Sentence Sunday January 13, 2013
Awesome six! And an intriguing storyline — I love how everyone is trying to figure out what might happen next.
Congrats on the new release!
Donna Cummings recently posted..Six Sentence Sunday: Back On Track #3
I always love reading dialogue that involves a conflict and you’ve described it very well. I like how she’s not afraid to challenge a general. Sorry for being late in reading your six.
Frank Fisher recently posted..Six Sunday – 01/13/13
Very naughty of them!
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So tense. Love it! She should kick his ass.