Good day! Here’s another taste of Made For Her, an erotic science fiction romance.
This excerpt follows immediately after last week’s.
“If you join the military today, you will learn how to fly these vessels and train the clones for future wars. Science fiction has now become our reality.” Yeah, like that would work to recruit people. Who wrote this speech anyway? Very few, if any, would ever make it to the SFTC, Space Flight Training Center. “It will never be your life on the line, but that of men and women created only for that purpose. Serving your country is no longer about sacrifice, but about honor.” This is such bullshit. People still die all the time. Rebels, like the ones who’d killed Daniel, still objected to cloning, causing destruction and death. Just last month, a popular off-base nightclub, known to be a military hang-out, had been turned to rubble in a matter of seconds after another anarchy group set off a bomb. Many, both clone and human-born, had died.
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Love this subject! Makes for a wonderful conflict!
I love clones and Sci-Fi. Great excerpt. Thanks for sharing.
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I really enjoy your snippets. Her inner thoughts mixing with the speech provide great tension.
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Thanks for sharing! Very well done.
Lacie Nation recently posted..Hump Day Hook
Yes! I definitely want this book:)
Molly Daniels recently posted..Welcome To My World:)
I love her conflicted feelings about the whole thing. Great hook. I definitely want to see moer of this story.
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Thanks for sharing…a great Hump Day Hook!
Great hook, really intriguing
Oh this is a really cool hook.
I can feel the tension surging through her. Nice one! Interesting subject too.
Flossie Benton Rogers recently posted..Hump Day Hook
I wonder if he reads it out – excellent conflict in such a short snippet.
Chantal Halpin recently posted..Hump Day Hook
I’m confused. Is the last line in italics also read? Or is that what the narrator is thinking?
Angelica Dawson recently posted..#HDH Hump Day Hook – Kitten
This sounds a bit different! Interesting…
Catherine Green recently posted..Hump Day Hook #HDH – Love Hurts (A Redcliffe Novel)
Intriguing hook
Love it! I’m such a nerd – I start thinking about Star Wars and the Tatooine cantina. (Han shot first, BTW).
Colette Saucier recently posted..Hump Day Hook 14: Pulse & Prejudice – Post Proposal
A world in turmoil, and her caught in the middle. Intriguing!
Lilly VanHorn recently posted..Hump Day Hook 2/6
I love the way you are rallying the peeps to protest the abuse of Clones. I’m writing Obama the moment I get off…what’s that? Not really an outrage? How can you say that?They are just as human as we are.
They aren’t? Fictional?
Oh then, never mind Mr. President Sir. Sorry to have called you on the bat phone.
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Even in Sci-Fi war sucks, whatever the galaxy. You’ve created a world different but true to human behavior. Nice hook.
Gem Sivad recently posted..Hump Day Hook
Interesting paragraph.
Very intense, but full of awesomeness!
Layna Pimentel recently posted..Hump Day Hook – February 6, 2013
Your worlds are always so believable. I love coming here for my dose of sci/fi.
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Intriguing set up. Like how she’s thinking while reading. Good hook!
C.
Wow! I really like this concept! And the title is fantastic for what’s going on. Awesome hook! I want to read this one.
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