Good day! Here’s another excerpt Made For Her, an erotic science fiction romance.
I’m skipping ahead this week. Mikayla just found out that her husband had been cloned. And the clone of him has been sent to her to train.
She is confronting her commanding officer.
General Madison wiped a hand across his face. “Mikayla, the clone in your squadron is the thirty-second clone made with Daniel’s DNA. He’s D32.”
“And you’ve kept them from me all along?” She dug her fingers into the leather. How had she never found out? “What happened to the rest?”
“The early ones didn’t survive. Those that lived stayed in the labs to help Onatria create better and better clones.”
The information left her mind spinning, and she struggled to breathe. “So why is this one out of the lab and in my squadron? Why couldn’t he be trained by someone else, somewhere else?”
General Madison smiled, and she had a feeling she wasn’t going to like his answer. “Because he wanted to be trained by the best. You are our best instructor and have turned out our best pilots. Why would we send him anywhere else?”
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Why indeed? Great conflict going here!
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Lots of unanswered questions in this.
Nice one, Jessica. Looking forward to more
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Drawing me in. Good hook.
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Oooh…can’t wait to see how she interacts with the clone…good hook!!
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Another great hook!
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The general’s response is chilling– no sense of why this would upset her.
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So he’s a clone…wonder if he’ll have any lingering memories from the original? And even if he doesn’t, she will! I sense trouble and joy ahead for these two!
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This sets up a great conflict! I’m also wondering if the clone might have some DNA memory from the husband.
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Interesting. A clone of the husband. Wonder how she’s going to handle the situation. Good hook!
Oh I want to slap this General, why send him anywhere else?! What a great teaser!!!
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That’s awkward…but could also potentially be quite fun. I have no idea if her husband is still around or gone or has passed, but it could be like starting over again if the latter is true. It would be like getting a second chance. How many of us have wished for that? Great hook!
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Oh lor’, that is SO sad. What an awful position to be in.
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Who’s Daniel? I think somebody who was very close to her. I loved the hook.
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A nice bit of conflict going on. Great hook!
Ooh that’s harsh! Great excerpt, I’m hooked.
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Nicely done scene filled with tension – great hook!
Oh I wonder what the clone will be like. And all the others didn’t survive. Hm, makes you wonder why D32 survived. Very interesting story. Can’t wait to see what happens next.
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